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it was hard not to notice her suffocating stance eliminating life from breath stark contrasts clashed chemist stench rife clawed nails fought with burnt electric hair face caked with false promise rude lips bled in twisted shapes mismatched words shot giddily from handgun mind long since spent guests' amused disdain stilled at sharp madness flashes of veined sclera screamed woe signatures etched on death warrants coffin lids clamped shut wild assertions rank religious fervor vomited about a hushed room charity's stretched compassion quit in rush to regain a summer's peace efforts to impress stabbed coarsely dense air strangled rational thought guilty images beset tortured space noxious noise begging revolt yet collective dagger falls aside mute lest honour too is lost as raucous gasps fail to impress with anything less than dreams of a quiet book easily wooed by a silent stream
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Dec 15, 2016
Dec 15, 2016 at 2:37 PM UTC
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it was hard not to notice her suffocating stance eliminating life from breath stark contrasts clashed chemist stench rife clawed nails fought with burnt electric hair face caked with false promise rude lips bled in twisted shapes mismatched words shot giddily from handgun mind long since spent guests' amused disdain stilled at sharp madness flashes of veined sclera screamed woe signatures etched on death warrants coffin lids clamped shut wild assertions rank religious fervor vomited about a hushed room charity's stretched compassion quit in rush to regain a summer's peace efforts to impress stabbed coarsely dense air strangled rational thought guilty images beset tortured space noxious noise begging revolt yet collective dagger falls aside mute lest honour too is lost as raucous gasps fail to impress with anything less than dreams of a quiet book easily wooed by a silent stream
musings of a fictional, failed 'blind date' sparked by an odious social experience - but the writing style itself inspired by NB's fascinating poetry
eleanor-prince
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Dec 15, 2016
Dec 15, 2016 at 2:37 PM UTC
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