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my heart, darker than the night sky turns black 
from such sadness you have clouded me grey.
 oh, how i dream someone will mix in white. on a rainy day i start to think back 
to when we’d spend time watching the trees sway;
 fluorescent green and yellow shine - not black. i noticed how your love began to lack 
a smile so genuine; no longer gay. 
your brand-new shirts are blood stained and off-white. your sudden change-of-heart gave mine a crack;
 paralyzed for weeks, i watch curtains fray 
and lovers overwhelmed with joy - not black. just like a train with rails off the track, 
i haven’t moved in weeks, wishing you’d lay 
with me one last time - to mix in some white. love letters i write to you form a stack
 in the bottom drawer of my desk, they stay 
and my heart becomes a little less black; 
since i figured out how to add some white.
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Dec 6, 2016
Dec 6, 2016 at 3:34 PM UTC
villanelle - 001
my heart, darker than the night sky turns black 
from such sadness you have clouded me grey.
 oh, how i dream someone will mix in white. on a rainy day i start to think back 
to when we’d spend time watching the trees sway;
 fluorescent green and yellow shine - not black. i noticed how your love began to lack 
a smile so genuine; no longer gay. 
your brand-new shirts are blood stained and off-white. your sudden change-of-heart gave mine a crack;
 paralyzed for weeks, i watch curtains fray 
and lovers overwhelmed with joy - not black. just like a train with rails off the track, 
i haven’t moved in weeks, wishing you’d lay 
with me one last time - to mix in some white. love letters i write to you form a stack
 in the bottom drawer of my desk, they stay 
and my heart becomes a little less black; 
since i figured out how to add some white.
my first villanelle, a sequel to my first sonnet.
ambrosia-lin
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Dec 6, 2016
Dec 6, 2016 at 3:34 PM UTC
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