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Don't                 think that promises                           are meant to solve              problems.                              Because they create more problems. Trust                    is something you can't have                             with promises. Just hate, just                             anger, just pain. People                promises false hope. These                            false hopes create false dreams. That Makes       us all a villain doesn't it? Promises            creates empty dreams                            false hopes,pure hate,                            cold pain, and a broken life.
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Nov 9, 2016
Nov 9, 2016 at 6:32 PM UTC
Promises
Don't                 think that promises                           are meant to solve              problems.                              Because they create more problems. Trust                    is something you can't have                             with promises. Just hate, just                             anger, just pain. People                promises false hope. These                            false hopes create false dreams. That Makes       us all a villain doesn't it? Promises            creates empty dreams                            false hopes,pure hate,                            cold pain, and a broken life.
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Nov 9, 2016
Nov 9, 2016 at 6:32 PM UTC
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