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the only sounds, the sloshing of our jungle boots   and a cricket symphony the air affluent with the odor of  the paddies   oxen dung, rice-rich stagnant water a lone golden cloud I see has two lives--one in the western sky; another on the water’s face and it suffers two fates, in unison, as light fades, while sky births crimson before it morphs to black     in its silent death throes, I see the cloud melt from the heavens but on the water its departure is less graceful     blurred, convulsive from our mad marching, our soles slaughtering a would be perfect reflection of  firmament
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Nov 3, 2016
Nov 3, 2016 at 6:50 PM UTC
Mekong water
the only sounds, the sloshing of our jungle boots   and a cricket symphony the air affluent with the odor of  the paddies   oxen dung, rice-rich stagnant water a lone golden cloud I see has two lives--one in the western sky; another on the water’s face and it suffers two fates, in unison, as light fades, while sky births crimson before it morphs to black     in its silent death throes, I see the cloud melt from the heavens but on the water its departure is less graceful     blurred, convulsive from our mad marching, our soles slaughtering a would be perfect reflection of  firmament
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Nov 3, 2016
Nov 3, 2016 at 6:50 PM UTC
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