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What once ruled the mantel Now shrivels beside outcasts Rust crawls toward the heart Shredding all relevance Abandoned aspirations Achievements left unrecognised Images remain unfocused Whilst consumed by encroaching demise The tarnished skeleton Unveils an aspect of reality. A youthful audience bears witness As coarse inscriptions sing A corrosive chorus.
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Oct 8, 2016
Oct 8, 2016 at 5:33 AM UTC
Old Trophy
What once ruled the mantel Now shrivels beside outcasts Rust crawls toward the heart Shredding all relevance Abandoned aspirations Achievements left unrecognised Images remain unfocused Whilst consumed by encroaching demise The tarnished skeleton Unveils an aspect of reality. A youthful audience bears witness As coarse inscriptions sing A corrosive chorus.
This describes an elderly person who has been abandoned in a rest home. They've refused to look at photos, achievements, memories, trophies... etc. because they remind them of when they were young and they only want to focus on how close they are to death. The person being described is in a similar situation to a trophy abandoned in a shed with paint tins, empty boxes... etc. It used to hold a lot of importance but now it's just another reject. The final stanza is a grandchild seeing what's become of their once loving grand parent.
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Oct 8, 2016
Oct 8, 2016 at 5:33 AM UTC
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