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When you said "I love you" it was like a room that was built on to an already finished house---- always an afterthought. When you said "I miss you" it was like drinking coffee from a teacup---- it never made a difference But when you made the mountains we had built up into valleys I asked "why?" And you said "Erosion".
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Aug 30, 2016
Aug 30, 2016 at 9:52 PM UTC
Erosion
When you said "I love you" it was like a room that was built on to an already finished house---- always an afterthought. When you said "I miss you" it was like drinking coffee from a teacup---- it never made a difference But when you made the mountains we had built up into valleys I asked "why?" And you said "Erosion".
jayseth-guberman
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Aug 30, 2016
Aug 30, 2016 at 9:52 PM UTC
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