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It's been a long time, on this bed,         listening to all these songs of the dead May be I should play something else instead,         a song that could make everything redd. "Dear, Do you remember any such song,         that could make me forever strong?" "Oh Joe, You waited all this time long         for a notion which you'll never get along." May be that's where I went wrong,         I regret begging you to remember that song. All I wanted was to try my luck before it's too long.         I thought you'd remember, that your love was that vigorous song. So now, I am back to the songs of the dead         wishing for that day to come with no dread. I hope for that day, a day with no more worries ahead,         on which I get that final mend, for all these wounds in my head. Now I can't feel a thing in this body           Now I am nothing but a dead-body. oh God, don't breath a new life into this body, of this noddy           Just let me stay in this lifeless body, to lead a life with no jeopardy.
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Aug 22, 2016
Aug 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM UTC
I wish you had remembered that song!!
It's been a long time, on this bed,         listening to all these songs of the dead May be I should play something else instead,         a song that could make everything redd. "Dear, Do you remember any such song,         that could make me forever strong?" "Oh Joe, You waited all this time long         for a notion which you'll never get along." May be that's where I went wrong,         I regret begging you to remember that song. All I wanted was to try my luck before it's too long.         I thought you'd remember, that your love was that vigorous song. So now, I am back to the songs of the dead         wishing for that day to come with no dread. I hope for that day, a day with no more worries ahead,         on which I get that final mend, for all these wounds in my head. Now I can't feel a thing in this body           Now I am nothing but a dead-body. oh God, don't breath a new life into this body, of this noddy           Just let me stay in this lifeless body, to lead a life with no jeopardy.
Please give me ur suggestions
justanotherfool
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Aug 22, 2016
Aug 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM UTC
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