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justanotherfool
justanotherfool
All I am trying to do is make poems/songs out of the write ups from my journal. I do not know any rules as I am not a poet. . Anyway, if time permits you, just advice me and give suggestions, so that I can be at least better at this, may be as a poet / / https://allpoetry.com/justanotherfool
breathe life into me you sell your white elephant a pie in the sky
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Aug 29, 2017
Aug 29, 2017 at 1:39 PM UTC
haiku-1
It's time I throw in the towel, I am getting way too older Please, don't give me a second wind, I just don't want to go it alone Oh, hear this, my Solid Rock, I don't even have a leg to stand on In these troubled waters, I need no more words as actions speak louder Why am I left here in this bind, with a red heart so black and blue I was told, that I was meant to shine, was it over mine or your head Better I leave this dead horse here, here on the other side of my bed Now I have shrunken too much, I guess I was just meant for someone's boot
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Jun 7, 2017
Jun 7, 2017 at 11:56 AM UTC
Deal me out, Lord!
Dear Lord, hear the cry of your child here She can't defy, please, slay down her fear bless her now, lord, with your mighty faith so never shall shake, she in this wraith. Dear Father, you are the real healer fend for her, Abba, as you need her Guide their hands, in her operation Guide her spirit, in her salvation Lord, the father of the fatherless reckon your daughter in her distress the miracle, it isn't from the doctors not their will, mercy, but her father's Let this day be her testimony for you saved her from her agony the cancer in her flesh, you designed for her good, she knows, so will not mind All in this world prays for compassion Father, let them see her, your creation Let them read her life, your rede to them Abba, claim her spirit, sign with your thumb
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Apr 22, 2017
Apr 22, 2017 at 3:31 PM UTC
Abba, claim her spirit, sign with your thumb (A prayer for Neena's Surgery and Recovery)
"Here she rests, now, here in her tiny little nest Her never ending quest, still, no one can wrest. You sleep for now, I will join you, that's a vow It's true, he has a new world for us to sow"
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Apr 20, 2017
Apr 20, 2017 at 3:37 PM UTC
Epitaph for Neena {A2W}
Oh Lord, she was born by you, she was born for you You had a plan, she was your plan, it never came out of the blue. Father, you know her inside, you know her outside You had a purpose, she was your purpose, it never can be denied. She wasn't born for a day, she was made to last forever. Lord, You planted eternity in her heart, for her, with her, together. This earth, nothing but an auberge, and this life, a mist We are here only for a while, for another moment, to make it your list. My Lord, fix her eyes, to the unseen, to the eternity You had a purpose, for her and for all of us, it was never mortality. Oh Lord, all she has is a troubled soul, a weak body You still give her strength, to lift her up to be there for your glory. Dear Father, smile on her, make her life your pleasure Let her see that smile, feel that smile as she is your divine treasure. Abba, the wounds in her heart, in her soul and flesh Needs your touch, the healer of wounds, let her spirit refresh.
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Apr 16, 2017
Apr 16, 2017 at 7:52 AM UTC
Prayer for Neena
Every time, I thought 'Oh, it's all done' 'huh, the battle I have can never be won' 'Fine time for the last bullet in my gun'. Hey, but still I'm here for another run. They were raining me down with their blames. All the devils were running in my brains. No more could I bear the pain in my veins. Hey, but still I'm here for another game. I just wonder how I am still alive! It's always like I was born to survive. Jesus made me fall, So that I can thrive. He made me fall, for my soul to revive. I've faced the test 'n I've tasted the test. Proved nothing to him, but I fed my quest, of where to dig my roots in the tempest, of why I survive, because I'm all blessed.
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Oct 3, 2016
Oct 3, 2016 at 11:41 AM UTC
The Thrive to Survive!
A brain, with a never-ending war inside A heart, in search of a new way to subside A pair of eyes, looking for a new divide It's me here, with every inch so mortified Everything here seems so off and so wrong Everyone is tripping toes to the euphoric songs They want me to get along and play along But still this solitude!, huh, and I'm not alone! Should I wake up tomorrow? that same question, same dilemma, that made me ask this now again This vacuum in my soul, invention of the inception, of the unceasing pain, struggle and suffocation. Dear Father, I need you here, I need you near I have all these people here, but still, I'm in fear, fear of war, fear of purdah, fear of despair, and of losing heart that you'd save me like yesteryear.
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Oct 1, 2016
Oct 1, 2016 at 12:08 PM UTC
Everyone's here but, I need you, My Lord.
Hey, You seem so happy! You're laughing loud as you can be, Over a bottle whiskey, With a hand full of LSD, Blood in every sneeze, dragging on your knees, yet you scream, 'Living in my Dreams' Hey, You seem so pleased as you see the dead in the seas, as you spit fire to see, the kids crying 'please'. You drink their blood with ices, hail the flag of ISIS And you claim that it's your sacrifices, huh, and that too for Jesus! Hey, you seem so satisfied, With yourself tied to your pride, Living in this bright side, away from the war side, Thanks to that divide, see that smile on your child Huh, you think you're fortified, you think you're purified, so you put the god aside, as you're satisfied. I just hope you'll all find time, to find on the other side, your keys to paradise.
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Aug 29, 2016
Aug 29, 2016 at 11:13 AM UTC
Keys to Paradise
Fell Down Cried Loud Helping Hand I Pulled Up She Pulled Down Fell Down Foot, Shoulders She Went Out I Laid Down Cried Loud No Helping Hand
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 3:02 PM UTC
A Helping Hand
Huh, Get me out of this race, I am too tired to chase and can no more outpace, all these rats in this place. God, I'm running out of dates, running out of grace and now there's a war in my brains, I can longer face. These were my thoughts of those days, thoughts of that phase a phase with all the haze, huh, really my dog days. You eve' had a thousand days, stuck in a maze, and all the people say, you are a ****** buttface! Oh, you know, all those Sundays, and your pastor takes a bible to praise, and shoves on your face, with a freaking verse. Sorry, It's time I replace, a 'God' that brings disgrace. It's time I erase, the 'you' in my brains, without leaving a trace. No please God, Why don't you come out of space, to this base and do what it takes, to make this g'damn world amaze! Oh my Lord, It's too cruel to stay, with all your plays, in that space, when your race is in search of a brace. Lord, Just open the gates, get us out of these straits, to a whole new place, Father, with all your grace. Lord, just in case, if you can't deal with our mistakes, just bury us in your rage, but please don't leave us in these Hades.
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Aug 28, 2016
Aug 28, 2016 at 12:34 PM UTC
Lord, Bury us in your Rage, but not in these Hades.