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A car arrives in the drive and stops outside the front door all the servants are there and George's parents wait there all importantly watching the car door the chauffeur gets out and opens the back door and George back from the hospital for shell shock gets out and puts a hand over his forehead to block out sunlight then looks around the grounds around the house his mother steps forward and takes his hand welcome home George she says George stares at her he nods but doesn't smile he looks into the faces of all those standing there by the front door as if amongst strangers his father moves forward and gently takes his son's arm George moves forward uncertainly his feet unsteady his hands shaking slightly his eyes move over the servants wide and staring then he stops and points to Polly Polly he says softly almost a mumble she gazes at him uncertain what to do the mother looks at Polly come help Polly Master George recognizes you and indicates with her other hand that she should come   so Polly walks to George's side and says nothing but smiles at him and he smiles back we'll go to his room the father says a footman takes the bags and follows George and his parents and Polly inside the house and up the wide staircase the other servants including the butler Dudman move away from the door and go about their tasks Dudman goes in and stares at the party walking upstairs slowly and sighs Polly has overstepped the line as far as he is concerned he'll have to watch her he muses watching the party disappear from the stairs and gives the absent Polly one of his cold stares.
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Jul 6, 2016
Jul 6, 2016 at 2:12 AM UTC
DUDMAN'S COLD STARE 1916.
A car arrives in the drive and stops outside the front door all the servants are there and George's parents wait there all importantly watching the car door the chauffeur gets out and opens the back door and George back from the hospital for shell shock gets out and puts a hand over his forehead to block out sunlight then looks around the grounds around the house his mother steps forward and takes his hand welcome home George she says George stares at her he nods but doesn't smile he looks into the faces of all those standing there by the front door as if amongst strangers his father moves forward and gently takes his son's arm George moves forward uncertainly his feet unsteady his hands shaking slightly his eyes move over the servants wide and staring then he stops and points to Polly Polly he says softly almost a mumble she gazes at him uncertain what to do the mother looks at Polly come help Polly Master George recognizes you and indicates with her other hand that she should come   so Polly walks to George's side and says nothing but smiles at him and he smiles back we'll go to his room the father says a footman takes the bags and follows George and his parents and Polly inside the house and up the wide staircase the other servants including the butler Dudman move away from the door and go about their tasks Dudman goes in and stares at the party walking upstairs slowly and sighs Polly has overstepped the line as far as he is concerned he'll have to watch her he muses watching the party disappear from the stairs and gives the absent Polly one of his cold stares.
GEORGE COMES HOME FROM THE HOSPITAL WHERE IS WAS TREATED FOR SHELL SHOCK IN 1916 AND HE RECOGNIZES POLLY THE MAID MUCH TO THE ANNOYANCE OF THE BUTLER DUDMAN
TerryCollett
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Jul 6, 2016
Jul 6, 2016 at 2:12 AM UTC
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