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"Keep quiet because you might be seen, Keep quiet because you may not be known! Be quiet Stay silent Say nothing, Or little as is safe. Do nothing or you may be noticed. Do nothing or you may be counted, Exposed, Lit by the spotlight of community. Stay safe, Stay hidden, Above all do not rock the boat, Neither yours or anothers. Keep your head down and remain." This was my advice to you, It worked. Was it good advice? Did you survive? Are you not here surviving? But where are you now? Have you escaped that institution? No. You are still there. Locked inside that prison tomb until death takes you on its sweet ride to freedom... or not. I am here now and so are you I am the one which emerged, You are the one who hid, And remained hidden. And continues to hide. I do not much care for you, And you are too scared to challenge my place in our life And too scared to meet the world from which you hid. Yet we together are not happy. I am... what is the word? a shadow? Relying on others fleeting glances to function. Like a magicians illusion, Aware that a true gaze will reveal me, Undo me And see you. Who are you? We do not know Because... You so rarely show yourself. Scared, Alone, You seek solitude. And so do not discover your self which May only be known through others. Through the sword or pillow play of true interaction Of vulnerability, conflict and loss. Through life, adventure and the longing of the soul. Like a rock falling from a cliff, Leaving its home of a thousand thousand years To emerge into a sunlit day And be worn, Tossed by the sea, Ground, Ground smooth by natures abrasion. To reveal and polish Those fossils, Those relics of the past, So that they may be beautifully displayed Not hidden. Showing its path through time and space.
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Jun 30, 2016
Jun 30, 2016 at 5:35 AM UTC
The Principal
"Keep quiet because you might be seen, Keep quiet because you may not be known! Be quiet Stay silent Say nothing, Or little as is safe. Do nothing or you may be noticed. Do nothing or you may be counted, Exposed, Lit by the spotlight of community. Stay safe, Stay hidden, Above all do not rock the boat, Neither yours or anothers. Keep your head down and remain." This was my advice to you, It worked. Was it good advice? Did you survive? Are you not here surviving? But where are you now? Have you escaped that institution? No. You are still there. Locked inside that prison tomb until death takes you on its sweet ride to freedom... or not. I am here now and so are you I am the one which emerged, You are the one who hid, And remained hidden. And continues to hide. I do not much care for you, And you are too scared to challenge my place in our life And too scared to meet the world from which you hid. Yet we together are not happy. I am... what is the word? a shadow? Relying on others fleeting glances to function. Like a magicians illusion, Aware that a true gaze will reveal me, Undo me And see you. Who are you? We do not know Because... You so rarely show yourself. Scared, Alone, You seek solitude. And so do not discover your self which May only be known through others. Through the sword or pillow play of true interaction Of vulnerability, conflict and loss. Through life, adventure and the longing of the soul. Like a rock falling from a cliff, Leaving its home of a thousand thousand years To emerge into a sunlit day And be worn, Tossed by the sea, Ground, Ground smooth by natures abrasion. To reveal and polish Those fossils, Those relics of the past, So that they may be beautifully displayed Not hidden. Showing its path through time and space.
I wrote this in march 2013 I think
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Jun 30, 2016
Jun 30, 2016 at 5:35 AM UTC
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