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a thousand miles we traveled to see your jack-hammered giants--we arrived at dusk just as the torrents began, bathing your chiseled countenances we hid in our chariot of modernity wipers flapping in syncopated time, Bluetooth belching out words from kin, "have a good time," "sorry for the storm..."   but I wasn't, for lightning struck a blackjack pine, and four mammoth men came to life, their sheen now electric, their long mute voices once again a resounding roar
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Jun 29, 2016
Jun 29, 2016 at 4:11 PM UTC
Rushmore in the rain
a thousand miles we traveled to see your jack-hammered giants--we arrived at dusk just as the torrents began, bathing your chiseled countenances we hid in our chariot of modernity wipers flapping in syncopated time, Bluetooth belching out words from kin, "have a good time," "sorry for the storm..."   but I wasn't, for lightning struck a blackjack pine, and four mammoth men came to life, their sheen now electric, their long mute voices once again a resounding roar
On our summer travels, we will visit Rushmore--I have a premonition it will rain while we are there
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Jun 29, 2016
Jun 29, 2016 at 4:11 PM UTC
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