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The door opened dropping me to the place where we first met. It started with this—  a wandering soul walking  in the lobby of a peculiar building And there’s a lift waiting for someone to come in. You let me stay. I never wonder why the lights are strangely dim or why the numbers on the wall did not cease to go on and off. 
An eerie silence filled the space between us; from where I am and where I wanted to be. 
 My eyes— they are unblinking as I venture towards your lowest of lows, 
 But you are unwilling, for one peek could distort your forbidding soul. 
So you brought me back to the floor you let me in— Strangers; metal walls around yourself. 
I pressed the button more than once thinking that it will come faster. But it can’t be opened. You won’t. 
So, for the last time I close my eyes and feel the cold barriers surrounding your heart.
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Jun 21, 2016
Jun 21, 2016 at 2:03 AM UTC
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The door opened dropping me to the place where we first met. It started with this—  a wandering soul walking  in the lobby of a peculiar building And there’s a lift waiting for someone to come in. You let me stay. I never wonder why the lights are strangely dim or why the numbers on the wall did not cease to go on and off. 
An eerie silence filled the space between us; from where I am and where I wanted to be. 
 My eyes— they are unblinking as I venture towards your lowest of lows, 
 But you are unwilling, for one peek could distort your forbidding soul. 
So you brought me back to the floor you let me in— Strangers; metal walls around yourself. 
I pressed the button more than once thinking that it will come faster. But it can’t be opened. You won’t. 
So, for the last time I close my eyes and feel the cold barriers surrounding your heart.
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Jun 21, 2016
Jun 21, 2016 at 2:03 AM UTC
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