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A dark and stormy day Stone-walled house and creaky floorboards Rain tapping all the windows, streaking them, As the windows shudder in their housings A high, keening wind Clap of thunder and a drawer being opened The cutlery inside rattling As the drawer comes to rest A roving and admiring eye So wet, reflecting the dull silver sheen Sizing up the pain within And the size of the blade to release it A lightning bolt outside the window Causes him to look up, through the pelting rain At his own reflection, to the dark hair And those sad, sad eyes He tilts his head a little, wondering Just how good a scar would look To beautify what is the exact opposite And decides, for the time being, against it The front door bangs open, Footsteps in the hall Resisting that encompassing impulse, He drops the blade, the butcher knife, back in The drawer "You need any help, Mother?"
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May 8, 2016
May 8, 2016 at 3:26 AM UTC
Impulse
A dark and stormy day Stone-walled house and creaky floorboards Rain tapping all the windows, streaking them, As the windows shudder in their housings A high, keening wind Clap of thunder and a drawer being opened The cutlery inside rattling As the drawer comes to rest A roving and admiring eye So wet, reflecting the dull silver sheen Sizing up the pain within And the size of the blade to release it A lightning bolt outside the window Causes him to look up, through the pelting rain At his own reflection, to the dark hair And those sad, sad eyes He tilts his head a little, wondering Just how good a scar would look To beautify what is the exact opposite And decides, for the time being, against it The front door bangs open, Footsteps in the hall Resisting that encompassing impulse, He drops the blade, the butcher knife, back in The drawer "You need any help, Mother?"
A story, not about me (for once, you self-centred so-and-so) but just a story. Let me know what you think of it. Please, any and all criticism is welcome
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26/Trans Female
May 8, 2016
May 8, 2016 at 3:26 AM UTC
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