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Time is like water, for it’s always there. It can slip through your fingers, Or just into air. In some places it's dense. In others it's thin. Not sure where it ends, Or where it begins. Sometimes it's nice. Sometimes it ***** You can have too little. You can have too much. Waters like time, And time is like water, The colder it is, Both start to get harder. And I’ll let you continue this rhyme: How time is like water, And water’s like time.
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Apr 28, 2016
Apr 28, 2016 at 11:21 PM UTC
Forcing an Analogy
Time is like water, for it’s always there. It can slip through your fingers, Or just into air. In some places it's dense. In others it's thin. Not sure where it ends, Or where it begins. Sometimes it's nice. Sometimes it ***** You can have too little. You can have too much. Waters like time, And time is like water, The colder it is, Both start to get harder. And I’ll let you continue this rhyme: How time is like water, And water’s like time.
03/14/10 Analogies are great! They often help me conceptualize ideas, explain my viewpoints and help me feel inspired. But they are a little arbitrary.
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Apr 28, 2016
Apr 28, 2016 at 11:21 PM UTC
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