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I was dry Laying on land breathing clean air Bathing in radient light But I got hot I grew restless I couldn’t take that bright sun So I tried to take a quick dip But I got carried away and took the plunge Now I’m splashing helplessly And the cold water’s stinging me It’s covering me And becoming me Dragging me down Deeper and deeper Further and Further Into the dark abyss The hellacious unknown I can’t reach the surface now I’m continuously struggling So I’ll give up and go down Letting it take me Becoming tangled in kelp And I’ll bury my head beneath the sand I’ll take one last look Up at the sun I once knew At the place where I once was I’ll close my eyes Let the darkness and engulf me And let go.
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Jan 5, 2012
Jan 5, 2012 at 5:37 PM UTC
Letting it Take Me
I was dry Laying on land breathing clean air Bathing in radient light But I got hot I grew restless I couldn’t take that bright sun So I tried to take a quick dip But I got carried away and took the plunge Now I’m splashing helplessly And the cold water’s stinging me It’s covering me And becoming me Dragging me down Deeper and deeper Further and Further Into the dark abyss The hellacious unknown I can’t reach the surface now I’m continuously struggling So I’ll give up and go down Letting it take me Becoming tangled in kelp And I’ll bury my head beneath the sand I’ll take one last look Up at the sun I once knew At the place where I once was I’ll close my eyes Let the darkness and engulf me And let go.
liz-devine
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Jan 5, 2012
Jan 5, 2012 at 5:37 PM UTC
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