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I've tried to warn you again and again about those times you say your hair is ugly because it doesn't glow as you'd like to or you are as uninteresting as a grain of salt dropped in the water of a cosmic ocean or your gritty knees aren't lovely because they aren't soft enough to sleep over them or your eyes aren't shining because you feel you are empty as if nothing matters I've tried to warn you, the dearest of my moons, that you are so wrong. I find you, let's see, fascinating, glowing, chaotic, enigmatic, magic, soft, lovely, ephemeral, yet, so unforgettable I find your hair dancing with your shoulders to some music that was really acute yes, I find it so amusing I could stare you for hours (no matter how much your hair 'isn't glowing') I say, I can connect with your veins and navigate through all your inner galaxies, in constant expansion, with their entropy walking around in the park of life and I believe it is so wonderful I can't believe my eyes. I could get lost in your skin every time you get asleep, because Radiohead isn't enough to make me feel like a lost song if I'm not lost around you, then, why am I lost? and, yet, your eyes are a mystery waiting for the rain to come and wash you away, and wash mankind away that's why, my darling, I keep insisting that you are so wrong.
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Apr 9, 2016
Apr 9, 2016 at 6:17 PM UTC
you are so wrong
I've tried to warn you again and again about those times you say your hair is ugly because it doesn't glow as you'd like to or you are as uninteresting as a grain of salt dropped in the water of a cosmic ocean or your gritty knees aren't lovely because they aren't soft enough to sleep over them or your eyes aren't shining because you feel you are empty as if nothing matters I've tried to warn you, the dearest of my moons, that you are so wrong. I find you, let's see, fascinating, glowing, chaotic, enigmatic, magic, soft, lovely, ephemeral, yet, so unforgettable I find your hair dancing with your shoulders to some music that was really acute yes, I find it so amusing I could stare you for hours (no matter how much your hair 'isn't glowing') I say, I can connect with your veins and navigate through all your inner galaxies, in constant expansion, with their entropy walking around in the park of life and I believe it is so wonderful I can't believe my eyes. I could get lost in your skin every time you get asleep, because Radiohead isn't enough to make me feel like a lost song if I'm not lost around you, then, why am I lost? and, yet, your eyes are a mystery waiting for the rain to come and wash you away, and wash mankind away that's why, my darling, I keep insisting that you are so wrong.
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Apr 9, 2016
Apr 9, 2016 at 6:17 PM UTC
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