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My name is Chris I avoid obvious rhymes and give you just the rancid; 'We feel you have not been communicating effectively as an employee' poet. So to you I said 'I'm ill' 'Care to spill?' she hisses. 'Yes' I said My names the one burning brightly up there in the corner of the room, 'Prince and King Godber' bearing wooden sign carved by the passion of a Norse god, a bearded dwarf on a throne. She responds; simple, ****** surreal metaphors notwithstanding I ain't slept... Small **** Na **** but let's not go into it tonight, naked. In her dreams he's laid with a woman, wept weeping eyes, distant stare, destroyer of hope, Eastern European,a broken painter cheating, but he didn't know till it was too late. The Sun became black The full moon became blood the great mountain ran with fire Pain. Passion, Nighttime. 'Do what thou Wilt' says the bald man and shrugs, setting a bomb off in the 20th century. I did, I do, I do - boom boom. no one laughs. She shouts angrily Fool, Coward, Prince Why don't you just come dance outside stroke away those cobwebs in your hair so I did, ripped the cobwebs out screamed outside, bashed my head on concrete, tried to **** myself once, maybe twice, contemplated more. Like Virginia my hidden idol. My sister in censured pain. Knees bashed, half-cut in dead of night screaming **** this provincial slaughterhouse, this cherryhouse of the half dead / half ****** merry go round and round, like Kereouc, but twice as merry, and that's saying something. Come and bathe yourself in my immortal **** she bleats 'look it up in your encyclopedia of shames' you'll just find a picture of a woman. It's intoned meaning It's poems, lips tell tales, tell them then. I dare yer to tell em. Scream them from rooftops. screaming eyes aglow, burning Blake fire poet looks down with lizard eyes you remind me of me Mum naked. Puke. Puke, ***** on the doormat. Violence in words, this language is obscene and that is why he said she said is gonna **** us. Already has. **** it, fancy overdosing yourself on abilify tonight poet? Not a plan. Not a plan. Don't go out drowning yourself in alcohol or life, not tonight, not tonight. Just never.
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Mar 7, 2016
Mar 7, 2016 at 4:18 PM UTC
He Said, She Said
My name is Chris I avoid obvious rhymes and give you just the rancid; 'We feel you have not been communicating effectively as an employee' poet. So to you I said 'I'm ill' 'Care to spill?' she hisses. 'Yes' I said My names the one burning brightly up there in the corner of the room, 'Prince and King Godber' bearing wooden sign carved by the passion of a Norse god, a bearded dwarf on a throne. She responds; simple, ****** surreal metaphors notwithstanding I ain't slept... Small **** Na **** but let's not go into it tonight, naked. In her dreams he's laid with a woman, wept weeping eyes, distant stare, destroyer of hope, Eastern European,a broken painter cheating, but he didn't know till it was too late. The Sun became black The full moon became blood the great mountain ran with fire Pain. Passion, Nighttime. 'Do what thou Wilt' says the bald man and shrugs, setting a bomb off in the 20th century. I did, I do, I do - boom boom. no one laughs. She shouts angrily Fool, Coward, Prince Why don't you just come dance outside stroke away those cobwebs in your hair so I did, ripped the cobwebs out screamed outside, bashed my head on concrete, tried to **** myself once, maybe twice, contemplated more. Like Virginia my hidden idol. My sister in censured pain. Knees bashed, half-cut in dead of night screaming **** this provincial slaughterhouse, this cherryhouse of the half dead / half ****** merry go round and round, like Kereouc, but twice as merry, and that's saying something. Come and bathe yourself in my immortal **** she bleats 'look it up in your encyclopedia of shames' you'll just find a picture of a woman. It's intoned meaning It's poems, lips tell tales, tell them then. I dare yer to tell em. Scream them from rooftops. screaming eyes aglow, burning Blake fire poet looks down with lizard eyes you remind me of me Mum naked. Puke. Puke, ***** on the doormat. Violence in words, this language is obscene and that is why he said she said is gonna **** us. Already has. **** it, fancy overdosing yourself on abilify tonight poet? Not a plan. Not a plan. Don't go out drowning yourself in alcohol or life, not tonight, not tonight. Just never.
This poem is primarily about the distance that often occurs between men and women when they don't talk to each other directly enough from their own lived experience. A schizoid howl in the dark. In one sense a poem about intense conflict, in another a poem about moving forward and learning to accept my own weaknesses. The use of graphic strong words and language is just there to emphasise the game that is at play within the words, namely the games men and woman play with each other through life to destroy each other, metaphorically., I hope if needs moderating that this is understood.
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Mar 7, 2016
Mar 7, 2016 at 4:18 PM UTC
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