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Somebody once told me that to love would be the strongest feeling of All. Yet I discovered a new feeling the other day, I felt Vacant. Surely most have felt this at some point in their lives. My mind was Empty. I sat there for a while contemplating what that meant, to be vacant. Over and over again, but could not yet come to a conclusion. Ultimately, I was confused. I turned to my mother for answers but Right at that moment, as I turned, I realised that it isn't just an emotion. Something physically leaves your body for your mind to become this. Oddly enough we are frozen almost, even for the shortest amount of time, Under a spell perhaps? No, not a spell, but a curse. And just Like that I understood, for us to be entirely conscious, we need someone to save our soul.
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Feb 20, 2016
Feb 20, 2016 at 1:16 AM UTC
Trapped in our own conscience.
Somebody once told me that to love would be the strongest feeling of All. Yet I discovered a new feeling the other day, I felt Vacant. Surely most have felt this at some point in their lives. My mind was Empty. I sat there for a while contemplating what that meant, to be vacant. Over and over again, but could not yet come to a conclusion. Ultimately, I was confused. I turned to my mother for answers but Right at that moment, as I turned, I realised that it isn't just an emotion. Something physically leaves your body for your mind to become this. Oddly enough we are frozen almost, even for the shortest amount of time, Under a spell perhaps? No, not a spell, but a curse. And just Like that I understood, for us to be entirely conscious, we need someone to save our soul.
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Feb 20, 2016
Feb 20, 2016 at 1:16 AM UTC
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