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brian allan’s big race today at lake ginninderra there was a bike canoe and foot race from john knight park to the steps of the belconnen mall on benjamin way and brian allan was competing along with other people who live around belconnen, and the opening song to start the race was advance australia fair, so as soon as the anthem was finished everyone got on their bikes and started heading to the dock where the canoes are, brian allan got onto a fabulous start really pumping iron in his legs riding down the cycle path listening to i want you back i gotta get b through to you, i want you back, and brian just hit the lead about 2 km away from the canoes and bria sped right down and had an unbeatable lead and when brian allan reached the canoes, he had a great lead, and it wouldn’t have mattered how bad he did in his canoe, but as brian got started, he started to hear the other bike riders coming toward him, so he started canoeing and headed right for the other side, but brian’s arms weren’t strong enough and when brian made it to the other end, he was 4th in line and had to make some ground but the canoe was slow and brian was worried that the next pack would catch up to him but brian got out and started running toward the steps of the mall, and because brian likes christmas, as he entered they played christmas where the gum trees blow, there is no frost and no snow christmas in australia’s hot, cold and frosty is what it’s not, and brian was running past the crowd brian, brian brian, the crowd yelled but he wasn’t going to catch the leading 3, but brian stuck at 4th place and brian sprinted down the road for the final prize point, and when brian allan made it to the steps yeah he won $145, which meant, even if he los to 3 races, he still won money for his race and brian went to the water booth to hydrate and started joking around with the other prize winners and brian sang, i am the champion, you see, you see i travelled from start to finish, oh yeseree i am the champion, i am the champion, i only came 4th but i won $145 yeah i am the champion of the world and then as the other racers were coming in, the caller said, we have got our top 4 money winners worked out, so we will start the presentations and brian allan came 4th, yeah and he was ****** happy about that, like that nobody counts except for brian and when brian was gven the $145, he cheered so loudly, yippee i ay the poem read brian is the best person better than the rest of them he is better than everyone there i know he only came 4th, but that is pretty good don’t ya think brian is the best person brian allan is the best and when the last place came running in, they started to clear up for next year saying this was a great race
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Feb 4, 2016
Feb 4, 2016 at 6:02 PM UTC
the dream i had where i won $145 in a race where i came 4th
brian allan’s big race today at lake ginninderra there was a bike canoe and foot race from john knight park to the steps of the belconnen mall on benjamin way and brian allan was competing along with other people who live around belconnen, and the opening song to start the race was advance australia fair, so as soon as the anthem was finished everyone got on their bikes and started heading to the dock where the canoes are, brian allan got onto a fabulous start really pumping iron in his legs riding down the cycle path listening to i want you back i gotta get b through to you, i want you back, and brian just hit the lead about 2 km away from the canoes and bria sped right down and had an unbeatable lead and when brian allan reached the canoes, he had a great lead, and it wouldn’t have mattered how bad he did in his canoe, but as brian got started, he started to hear the other bike riders coming toward him, so he started canoeing and headed right for the other side, but brian’s arms weren’t strong enough and when brian made it to the other end, he was 4th in line and had to make some ground but the canoe was slow and brian was worried that the next pack would catch up to him but brian got out and started running toward the steps of the mall, and because brian likes christmas, as he entered they played christmas where the gum trees blow, there is no frost and no snow christmas in australia’s hot, cold and frosty is what it’s not, and brian was running past the crowd brian, brian brian, the crowd yelled but he wasn’t going to catch the leading 3, but brian stuck at 4th place and brian sprinted down the road for the final prize point, and when brian allan made it to the steps yeah he won $145, which meant, even if he los to 3 races, he still won money for his race and brian went to the water booth to hydrate and started joking around with the other prize winners and brian sang, i am the champion, you see, you see i travelled from start to finish, oh yeseree i am the champion, i am the champion, i only came 4th but i won $145 yeah i am the champion of the world and then as the other racers were coming in, the caller said, we have got our top 4 money winners worked out, so we will start the presentations and brian allan came 4th, yeah and he was ****** happy about that, like that nobody counts except for brian and when brian was gven the $145, he cheered so loudly, yippee i ay the poem read brian is the best person better than the rest of them he is better than everyone there i know he only came 4th, but that is pretty good don’t ya think brian is the best person brian allan is the best and when the last place came running in, they started to clear up for next year saying this was a great race
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Feb 4, 2016
Feb 4, 2016 at 6:02 PM UTC
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