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Normal events of life: Natality, identity, wedlock, fatality As disrupting events triumph the rhythm Destroys the loop, making life aloof There comes one wonder Revisiting the events, one must ponder Twists and turns, identity is profound Discovered as it may be, but still unacceptable Cuz normality Disdains And retains from interchangeable But thou shall break this bubble To free himself and feel more comfortable Peers will judge, the true ones won't Only they can understand but others don't One may even find himself Alone Smiling away in front of a thousand clones Indeed they will stare, Coldhearted, Confused, Look alike stones. Their judgement pierced through before, This time, this resolution has led to no more! Health was draining, stooping below Feelings of distress, sadness hollow Complain and nag to achieve pity and sorrow But what's the point of such negativity It only brings bad news! Depression and lesser longevity. So enough is enough! Rebirth is in order A new soul emerges that can only grow stronger and stronger Put it through a test, Try it out, Beat it down, Bow down it shall no longer!    - By Ali Q. =)
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Feb 1, 2016
Feb 1, 2016 at 3:36 PM UTC
REBIRTH IS IN ORDER
Normal events of life: Natality, identity, wedlock, fatality As disrupting events triumph the rhythm Destroys the loop, making life aloof There comes one wonder Revisiting the events, one must ponder Twists and turns, identity is profound Discovered as it may be, but still unacceptable Cuz normality Disdains And retains from interchangeable But thou shall break this bubble To free himself and feel more comfortable Peers will judge, the true ones won't Only they can understand but others don't One may even find himself Alone Smiling away in front of a thousand clones Indeed they will stare, Coldhearted, Confused, Look alike stones. Their judgement pierced through before, This time, this resolution has led to no more! Health was draining, stooping below Feelings of distress, sadness hollow Complain and nag to achieve pity and sorrow But what's the point of such negativity It only brings bad news! Depression and lesser longevity. So enough is enough! Rebirth is in order A new soul emerges that can only grow stronger and stronger Put it through a test, Try it out, Beat it down, Bow down it shall no longer!    - By Ali Q. =)
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Feb 1, 2016
Feb 1, 2016 at 3:36 PM UTC
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