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I have so much self hate But  I am so vulnerable  But I just  When I cry  I just Can't  But I cry too much  Can't Seem  So I think  Seem To  That I may just  To Evict  Give up  Evict It all  One day  It all Maybe it will consume all of me.
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Jan 15, 2016
Jan 15, 2016 at 10:15 AM UTC
NYPC #29 (Confusing, I know)
I have so much self hate But  I am so vulnerable  But I just  When I cry  I just Can't  But I cry too much  Can't Seem  So I think  Seem To  That I may just  To Evict  Give up  Evict It all  One day  It all Maybe it will consume all of me.
So, Read one side of bold for poem "1" And then read the italics for poem "2" Write a poem that has a crunchy outside and a soft center. (from Joe)   Hmmm...Does this have to do with subject matter? with sound? with shape? with something only you would think of?
#confused#cry#odd#soft#hi#crunchy#nypc
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Jan 15, 2016
Jan 15, 2016 at 10:15 AM UTC
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