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All my life I was taught Feelings come and go As the rain and wind do show. All my life I was taught I must stand in line, That it must stay as sturdy as the Rhine. All my life I was taught Rules are to be followed As birds walk on a tree that has been hollowed. But must we believe What we have been taught For I have for so long thought that not? Must we believe What they all preach Or become new like waves on a beach? Must we believe That they stoop so low Or be individual like a river’s flow? I now believe That I must indeed Find something that the world does so need.
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:40 PM UTC
River Flow
All my life I was taught Feelings come and go As the rain and wind do show. All my life I was taught I must stand in line, That it must stay as sturdy as the Rhine. All my life I was taught Rules are to be followed As birds walk on a tree that has been hollowed. But must we believe What we have been taught For I have for so long thought that not? Must we believe What they all preach Or become new like waves on a beach? Must we believe That they stoop so low Or be individual like a river’s flow? I now believe That I must indeed Find something that the world does so need.
A pretty simple poem I though up recently. I am open to any critiques that you have (ALSO GOES FOR ANY OF MY OTHER PEOMS)
#art#water#river#simplicity#critique#conformity#waterfall#standards#progression#improvement
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rahrah000
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:40 PM UTC
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