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Vandalized,
 Raked,
 Ripped apart by a melodious gaze. The cloak of beauty,
 Gasping for air for its victims,
 Breath is taken for granted. A curtain,
 It hangs over the light,
 Beautiful illumination implanted into darkness. The sounds of happiness, 
Covered,
 Hidden by a warped reality. There once was a hole,
 Many fell into it,
 And most never came back. There cloaks torn,
 Ripped apart by one knife,
 A blade of humility and vulnerability. Who would fall into this,
 Why would they want a life full of vanity? 
Fake smiles, and empty eyes stare at them so helplessly. Jagged edges,
 Black, and dull pupils
, The interlocked look is vigilant. Tattered, 
 Abandoned,
 The life of volatile beauty and emotion.
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Dec 15, 2015
Dec 15, 2015 at 10:01 PM UTC
Torn
Vandalized,
 Raked,
 Ripped apart by a melodious gaze. The cloak of beauty,
 Gasping for air for its victims,
 Breath is taken for granted. A curtain,
 It hangs over the light,
 Beautiful illumination implanted into darkness. The sounds of happiness, 
Covered,
 Hidden by a warped reality. There once was a hole,
 Many fell into it,
 And most never came back. There cloaks torn,
 Ripped apart by one knife,
 A blade of humility and vulnerability. Who would fall into this,
 Why would they want a life full of vanity? 
Fake smiles, and empty eyes stare at them so helplessly. Jagged edges,
 Black, and dull pupils
, The interlocked look is vigilant. Tattered, 
 Abandoned,
 The life of volatile beauty and emotion.
drew-daniel-young
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Dec 15, 2015
Dec 15, 2015 at 10:01 PM UTC
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