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. O                                                                                   •• i really don't see the need to                                 •• dictate•the way the dishes are                            •• sorted in order in the sink •i                               •• don't see the point in being                                    •• irate• if the door creaks when you try to think•     •• i can't tell apart between emotions you feel•sad-    •• ness and disappointment, they look the same to    •• me•i do not care  if it's mauve or teal•for good-     •• ness sake, the  cushions...,  they look fine to me!!     •• •well, i now wave my white flag and surrender      ••                             • because all these  differences...      ••                           don't matter at all•just know that      ••                          i have sworn to love you forever• ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                                                         ***even if you drive me insane                                         and up the wall•***
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Dec 2, 2015
Dec 2, 2015 at 11:14 AM UTC
Surrender
. O                                                                                   •• i really don't see the need to                                 •• dictate•the way the dishes are                            •• sorted in order in the sink •i                               •• don't see the point in being                                    •• irate• if the door creaks when you try to think•     •• i can't tell apart between emotions you feel•sad-    •• ness and disappointment, they look the same to    •• me•i do not care  if it's mauve or teal•for good-     •• ness sake, the  cushions...,  they look fine to me!!     •• •well, i now wave my white flag and surrender      ••                             • because all these  differences...      ••                           don't matter at all•just know that      ••                          i have sworn to love you forever• ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                 ••                                                                                                                         ***even if you drive me insane                                         and up the wall•***
Concrete Poem 19 of 30 Tap on the hashtag "30daysofconcrete" below to view more offerings in the series. :) .
ryn
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Dec 2, 2015
Dec 2, 2015 at 11:14 AM UTC
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