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We sat in bathtubs in rundown motel rooms I told him stories of my mother He told me he'd never been in love I noticed his uneven breathing The way his chest fell a little faster The way his eyes didn't have much glimmer The faucet was dry The bathtub was empty We floated anyway On broken promises Taunted memories Unspoken names I saw every drop of blood I saw every tear I let him rest his weariness on my lap I poured my attention into his flaws Crooked teeth Lopsided chest The way his forehead wrinkled Those were the things I remembered the most When he left I never loved him He never loved me But it was close And it was tantalizing
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Nov 3, 2015
Nov 3, 2015 at 3:31 PM UTC
motel 8
We sat in bathtubs in rundown motel rooms I told him stories of my mother He told me he'd never been in love I noticed his uneven breathing The way his chest fell a little faster The way his eyes didn't have much glimmer The faucet was dry The bathtub was empty We floated anyway On broken promises Taunted memories Unspoken names I saw every drop of blood I saw every tear I let him rest his weariness on my lap I poured my attention into his flaws Crooked teeth Lopsided chest The way his forehead wrinkled Those were the things I remembered the most When he left I never loved him He never loved me But it was close And it was tantalizing
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Nov 3, 2015
Nov 3, 2015 at 3:31 PM UTC
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