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When the bomb dropped I was at the epicentre With my back turned I didn't see it coming. When the sky fell I turned inside out And became the earth My heart bled everywhere. But over the hill came an army Carrying no weapons Their palpable strength like a mirage Their love blinding like laser beams. They formed a force field Lifted me up Filled in the cracks And carried me. Indestructible strength Unequivocal faith Infinite power My army of love.
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Oct 31, 2015
Oct 31, 2015 at 4:46 PM UTC
Army of love
When the bomb dropped I was at the epicentre With my back turned I didn't see it coming. When the sky fell I turned inside out And became the earth My heart bled everywhere. But over the hill came an army Carrying no weapons Their palpable strength like a mirage Their love blinding like laser beams. They formed a force field Lifted me up Filled in the cracks And carried me. Indestructible strength Unequivocal faith Infinite power My army of love.
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doree-fleur
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Oct 31, 2015
Oct 31, 2015 at 4:46 PM UTC
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