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Her excited nerves are tingling He met her on the sanded pier Their hungry hearts are mingling His pocket keys are jingling He carries good luck everywhere Her excited nerves are tingling While they sipped cups of singling He said words she wanted to hear Their hungry hearts are mingling They danced and went swingling Everyone saw both of them there Her excited nerves are tingling He bent low, whispering, ingling Silencing all of her lingering fear Their hungry hearts are mingling Today, their lives are commingling It's a truth they can't wait to share Her excited nerves are tingling Their hungry hearts are mingling.
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Oct 28, 2015
Oct 28, 2015 at 1:51 PM UTC
Mingling hearts (Villanelle)
Her excited nerves are tingling He met her on the sanded pier Their hungry hearts are mingling His pocket keys are jingling He carries good luck everywhere Her excited nerves are tingling While they sipped cups of singling He said words she wanted to hear Their hungry hearts are mingling They danced and went swingling Everyone saw both of them there Her excited nerves are tingling He bent low, whispering, ingling Silencing all of her lingering fear Their hungry hearts are mingling Today, their lives are commingling It's a truth they can't wait to share Her excited nerves are tingling Their hungry hearts are mingling.
My first attempt at this style. I hope to do better next time :-)
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Oct 28, 2015
Oct 28, 2015 at 1:51 PM UTC
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