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i feel you with me especially when i'm blue i remember the simple words you offered that told me you cared i know it was difficult for you, sometimes showing compassion encouragement love but i never doubted it and i always, always felt it my hurt was your hurt my desperation was your desperation my happiness blazed in your eyes i will never be loved like that again i will never feel as secure as i did with you i miss you, dad i miss your solidness your quiet the comfort i got when you reached for my son yes, the good die young and you... you were one of the best.
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Oct 18, 2015
Oct 18, 2015 at 7:11 PM UTC
leo, my dad
i feel you with me especially when i'm blue i remember the simple words you offered that told me you cared i know it was difficult for you, sometimes showing compassion encouragement love but i never doubted it and i always, always felt it my hurt was your hurt my desperation was your desperation my happiness blazed in your eyes i will never be loved like that again i will never feel as secure as i did with you i miss you, dad i miss your solidness your quiet the comfort i got when you reached for my son yes, the good die young and you... you were one of the best.
it's the quiet times i miss him most
susanjj
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Oct 18, 2015
Oct 18, 2015 at 7:11 PM UTC
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