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Your presence passes me like a slow-moving satellite revolving around my head, slurred into mesh—so gravitated. Love is a shade which covers me close to your body, in sync like the movements of the planets, pivoting harmonious in the deep, dark mystery of your sheltered embrace, and the universe seems to settle around me calm and constellated.    Your eyes, a deep depiction in the mind, so starry, I see nothing more but stars. Bright as the brilliance of the fire of my affection at the core of my soul, lit with passion, intense as a thousand suns, a million moonlit galaxies, is my love which seems to have no end. Your presence passes me, a slow-moving satellite revolving around like a moon to Jupiter, boy, I feel that pull.
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Aug 15, 2015
Aug 15, 2015 at 4:59 PM UTC
Callisto to Jupitar
Your presence passes me like a slow-moving satellite revolving around my head, slurred into mesh—so gravitated. Love is a shade which covers me close to your body, in sync like the movements of the planets, pivoting harmonious in the deep, dark mystery of your sheltered embrace, and the universe seems to settle around me calm and constellated.    Your eyes, a deep depiction in the mind, so starry, I see nothing more but stars. Bright as the brilliance of the fire of my affection at the core of my soul, lit with passion, intense as a thousand suns, a million moonlit galaxies, is my love which seems to have no end. Your presence passes me, a slow-moving satellite revolving around like a moon to Jupiter, boy, I feel that pull.
This was a poem I wrote in the 12th grade for my first boy friend lol.
Aj
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Fort Lauderdale
Aug 15, 2015
Aug 15, 2015 at 4:59 PM UTC
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