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How to imagine a poem-- when you speak those lines do not say that you are dying or inlove, but describe the way it's happening. Death/Sad. There's a noose around my neck the rough fibers are digging in reminding me of my fathers hands-- when I was eight years old as he strangled me to sleep. My helium light in the corner begins to flicker as it always does when there's a thunderstorm, even as my world fades I know it's sunny skies today. Love. There's a difference between smiling and the way your lips slant upwards. They remind me of my favorite nuts; cashews are the happiest of all of them the only ones able to make a smile that puts all others to shame. Nature/Happy. As hydrogen and oxygen combine making my sweet abode the ocean-- I sift saltwater side to side in my mouth as I attempt to draw the air into my lungs. Fish were born to exist here where I am lucky to float in their home today. End. Poems are the hidden lizard in your back yard that always seems to be there watching you-- or the pesky neighbor cat which hangs on the fence riskily tightrope walking to sneak upon it's prey. ...The meaning is always there, but sometimes it's difficult to see...
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Jul 22, 2015
Jul 22, 2015 at 4:34 AM UTC
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How to imagine a poem-- when you speak those lines do not say that you are dying or inlove, but describe the way it's happening. Death/Sad. There's a noose around my neck the rough fibers are digging in reminding me of my fathers hands-- when I was eight years old as he strangled me to sleep. My helium light in the corner begins to flicker as it always does when there's a thunderstorm, even as my world fades I know it's sunny skies today. Love. There's a difference between smiling and the way your lips slant upwards. They remind me of my favorite nuts; cashews are the happiest of all of them the only ones able to make a smile that puts all others to shame. Nature/Happy. As hydrogen and oxygen combine making my sweet abode the ocean-- I sift saltwater side to side in my mouth as I attempt to draw the air into my lungs. Fish were born to exist here where I am lucky to float in their home today. End. Poems are the hidden lizard in your back yard that always seems to be there watching you-- or the pesky neighbor cat which hangs on the fence riskily tightrope walking to sneak upon it's prey. ...The meaning is always there, but sometimes it's difficult to see...
I don't know why I wrote this, I was just reading people's poems and that's the thing people do the most when they write instead of describing they are always telling.  Show me your feelings, I promise you it's safe to do so.  (there are many things that could be fixed to make a more pleasant poem, but as usual I am too hhmm fickle to do so, hah.)
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Jul 22, 2015
Jul 22, 2015 at 4:34 AM UTC
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