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I always had a connection to ciggarettes because they quite frankly reminded me of myself. Like : how people desired them so desperately when they were miserable , how people valued them so intensly when they burned away all their troubles and treated them with such caution. But, then I connected with them because as soon as I burned out ( became fragile and fell into a temperate pit of darkness ) my ashes fell to the ground. I was stepped upon and left all alone on the numbing winter soil alongside the damp mist and minute insects. This is where I found my family. Other humankind just like me, mortals who have been stepped upon and wounded emotionally and demanded when needed and then suddenly despised and judged ; judged for solely declaring their beliefs. Beings that have been disregarded from communities for merely attempting to combat the injustices of our corrupt society. My family and I thought we would resurrect and magically become unbroken and desirable again. But darling not all stories have happy endings .
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Jul 3, 2015
Jul 3, 2015 at 12:13 PM UTC
Metaphorical tendencies
I always had a connection to ciggarettes because they quite frankly reminded me of myself. Like : how people desired them so desperately when they were miserable , how people valued them so intensly when they burned away all their troubles and treated them with such caution. But, then I connected with them because as soon as I burned out ( became fragile and fell into a temperate pit of darkness ) my ashes fell to the ground. I was stepped upon and left all alone on the numbing winter soil alongside the damp mist and minute insects. This is where I found my family. Other humankind just like me, mortals who have been stepped upon and wounded emotionally and demanded when needed and then suddenly despised and judged ; judged for solely declaring their beliefs. Beings that have been disregarded from communities for merely attempting to combat the injustices of our corrupt society. My family and I thought we would resurrect and magically become unbroken and desirable again. But darling not all stories have happy endings .
mahdiya-patel
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Jul 3, 2015
Jul 3, 2015 at 12:13 PM UTC
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