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Don’t just comment on others life First try to walk on their shoes Find out the hardness When the shoes doesn’t fit and is lose You have that fitting shoes You are positive Once try with a large size And find out why I am negative Don’t you think, I have tried To make it fit by sewing Your shoes are comfortable So no need of altering Let’s just exchange our shoes for sometime my dear You experience with mine and I do the same with yours When you find out the difference Ask yourself whether the comment you gave was fair
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Jun 23, 2015
Jun 23, 2015 at 10:09 PM UTC
Unfitting shoes
Don’t just comment on others life First try to walk on their shoes Find out the hardness When the shoes doesn’t fit and is lose You have that fitting shoes You are positive Once try with a large size And find out why I am negative Don’t you think, I have tried To make it fit by sewing Your shoes are comfortable So no need of altering Let’s just exchange our shoes for sometime my dear You experience with mine and I do the same with yours When you find out the difference Ask yourself whether the comment you gave was fair
banita-khanal
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Jun 23, 2015
Jun 23, 2015 at 10:09 PM UTC
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