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Lights are dimmed Drifting off to sleep... Commander speaks To 18 year olds Who are going to war Nothing is new Taut from experience Strict with bits of humor Failure comes not from confusion But fear of asking Your superior
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Sep 2, 2011
Sep 2, 2011 at 10:49 PM UTC
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Lights are dimmed Drifting off to sleep... Commander speaks To 18 year olds Who are going to war Nothing is new Taut from experience Strict with bits of humor Failure comes not from confusion But fear of asking Your superior
breean-pennio
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Sep 2, 2011
Sep 2, 2011 at 10:49 PM UTC
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