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when I’m this drunk and you’re a thousand miles away I miss the plenary version of you everything that you are and all that I perceive you to be why aren’t you here with me I want to stop giving up I want to just do it I want to love you completely with all that I am and with no reservations because when you’re a thousand miles away I know that the daily irritations and influences that detract from our utter (what an ugly word) and complete devotion to one another are just that distraction and irritations the insecurities and the self-defeating effects of life are nothing when I have this much whiskey in me I know that my love for you is real more real than Paris for Helen more significant than Romeo for Juliet I love you as I love the heart and lungs in my own breast without you I am bereft of a vital ***** necessary for life for existence when I am this drunk I don’t make sense but I know more truly than I know my name that you are essential and that I love you always
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Jun 3, 2015
Jun 3, 2015 at 12:43 AM UTC
plenary drunk love
when I’m this drunk and you’re a thousand miles away I miss the plenary version of you everything that you are and all that I perceive you to be why aren’t you here with me I want to stop giving up I want to just do it I want to love you completely with all that I am and with no reservations because when you’re a thousand miles away I know that the daily irritations and influences that detract from our utter (what an ugly word) and complete devotion to one another are just that distraction and irritations the insecurities and the self-defeating effects of life are nothing when I have this much whiskey in me I know that my love for you is real more real than Paris for Helen more significant than Romeo for Juliet I love you as I love the heart and lungs in my own breast without you I am bereft of a vital ***** necessary for life for existence when I am this drunk I don’t make sense but I know more truly than I know my name that you are essential and that I love you always
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Jun 3, 2015
Jun 3, 2015 at 12:43 AM UTC
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