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happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday... happy birthday... happy birthday, to... Today I felt like I was born as a much saddder person I feel sadness because I feel lost the country I lived in all my life decided it was somewhere else and the people I called countrymen and friends decided to go with it nothing looks like it used to nothing feels like it's supposed to and even nothing has changed to become this everything. the sound of laughter escaping lips needs subtitles and the messages from my best friend's eyes need decrypting a knowing look no longer knowing where my parents house is where the giant tree, with kites stuck and tire swings is planted where I spent my years growing my old toys lie in attic space   I do not know what happened I don't know what went wrong but I just want to hear again the tune of that familiar birthday song happy...bir....ay ha...pybur... now, how did all that go?
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Aug 10, 2011
Aug 10, 2011 at 7:02 AM UTC
familiarly strange
happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday... happy birthday... happy birthday, to... Today I felt like I was born as a much saddder person I feel sadness because I feel lost the country I lived in all my life decided it was somewhere else and the people I called countrymen and friends decided to go with it nothing looks like it used to nothing feels like it's supposed to and even nothing has changed to become this everything. the sound of laughter escaping lips needs subtitles and the messages from my best friend's eyes need decrypting a knowing look no longer knowing where my parents house is where the giant tree, with kites stuck and tire swings is planted where I spent my years growing my old toys lie in attic space   I do not know what happened I don't know what went wrong but I just want to hear again the tune of that familiar birthday song happy...bir....ay ha...pybur... now, how did all that go?
please tell me how to improve this poem.
fuckyoupo
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Aug 10, 2011
Aug 10, 2011 at 7:02 AM UTC
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