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I rarely edit my work I prefer the fresh green words that sprout in the moment There is something disingenuous to me about letting someone even a later self uproot and replant my ideas My mother wants me to let the editors inside she wants me to open my sanctuary to the norms the opinions the pen of the world I'm afraid to touch my own words because god loves ugly because I love ugly what would happen if I let them touch my thoughts? I think therefor I am so if they help me think am I still? give me your downcast, your ugly, your broken the grit and the grime of your teeming mind I lift my pen, I peel back the wool this is life, there is no golden door of escape complacency is sickness have I found it of from it do I flee?
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May 21, 2015
May 21, 2015 at 4:26 PM UTC
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I rarely edit my work I prefer the fresh green words that sprout in the moment There is something disingenuous to me about letting someone even a later self uproot and replant my ideas My mother wants me to let the editors inside she wants me to open my sanctuary to the norms the opinions the pen of the world I'm afraid to touch my own words because god loves ugly because I love ugly what would happen if I let them touch my thoughts? I think therefor I am so if they help me think am I still? give me your downcast, your ugly, your broken the grit and the grime of your teeming mind I lift my pen, I peel back the wool this is life, there is no golden door of escape complacency is sickness have I found it of from it do I flee?
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May 21, 2015
May 21, 2015 at 4:26 PM UTC
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