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I actually wrote 2 versions of this poem, if you care to read the original draft, here it is: This small black rock jutting out of the ocean. Step back in time and slow down the clock. Forget about life for a while and watch the fisherman on boats flowing over an ocean of turquoise. Watch the tide pull seaweed and birds battle the wind, high up on the cliffs there’s a cave full of secrets. From mountain peaks flirting with clouds, to the trill little song of the warbling skylark - soot coloured ravens the spirits of old, what a breathtaking place this is to behold.
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Apr 7
Apr 7, 2026 at 6:15 PM UTC
SKYLARKS & STONE - original draft
I once had a monstera Who thrived in my tears And melted mascara We loved to share fears She's sunburnt easily So I'm happy to wallow Simply ceaselessly Since laughter is too bright Content with shared misery I keep curtains drawn tight To keep her close by Now I have your cactus And I love it so much I do what I've practiced Gentle with my touch I water it with my tears I share all my fears You've left me with this plant So I can't let it die I love it so much So I cry and cry and cry But something strange happens Making my salt falter The leaves shrivel and wrinkle Maybe it needs more water I scream as I cry Because it keeps wilting I love it I love it I love it Maybe it needs more water I'm so scared to lose this To lose what's left of you So nurture it in my way It hasn't seen the sun in days Why is my cactus dying? Maybe I am just not trying Hard enough to water it The dam of my sorrows pours free I'm flooding my favorite plant Why is it dying? I mix my tears with paint It will accept my love if it's beautiful I mix my tears with blood It will accept my love if it's pitiful I mix my tears with sugar It will accept my love if it's sweet I pour and pour and pour And love and love and love And cry and cry and cry Please, I'm begging, just don't die My tears fall into empty hands A carcass sits in the window Longing for desert sands I realize too late The sun is what it craves Its roots filled with rot Left too long in a soaked *** The sun warms a plant long gone I tried too hard. I tried too wrong Neck aching, head bowed My cactus can't love me now
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Mar 6
Mar 6, 2026 at 3:54 PM UTC
Lord, I Worry That Love is Violence (revised)
I once had a monstera Who thrived in my tears And melted mascara We loved to share fears She's sunburnt easily So I'm happy to wallow Simply ceaselessly Since laughter is too bright Content with shared misery I keep curtains drawn tight To keep her close by Now I have your cactus And I love it so much I do what I've practiced Gentle with my touch I water it with my tears I share all my fears You've left me with this plant So I can't let it die I love it so much So I cry and cry and cry But something strange happens Making my salt falter The leaves shrivel and wrinkle Maybe it needs more water I scream as I cry Because it keeps wilting I love it I love it I love it Maybe it needs more water I'm so scared to lose this To lose what's left of you So nurture it in my way It hasn't seen the sun in days Why is my cactus dying? Maybe I am just not trying Hard enough to water it The dam of my sorrows pours free I'm flooding my favorite plant Why is it dying? I mix my tears with paint It will accept my love if it's beautiful I mix my tears with blood It will accept my love if it's pitiful I mix my tears with sugar It will accept my love if it's sweet I pour and pour and pour And love and love and love And cry and cry and cry Please, I'm begging, just don't die My tears fall into empty hands A carcass sits in the window Longing for desert sands I realize too late The sun is what it craves Its roots filled with rot Left too long in a soaked *** The sun warms a plant long gone I tried too hard. I tried too wrong Neck aching, head bowed My cactus can't love me now
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I wept when I saw Our blue kayak mounted high on a coffee shop wall The blue kayak we didn't buy Is now mounted in a coffee shop Offering a different escape We never did buy the blue kayak Or take that river trip It's now mounted in a coffee shop As if it was art For a different kind of escape.
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Jan 15
Jan 15, 2026 at 1:21 PM UTC
Blue Kayak
Some claim I’m rather edgy They look up to my serenity Idealise my brain capacity - I’m often told I’m pretty And I won’t make a scene,   disproportionally adjust to your screen   ask about you despite me, I’ll hug you without editing Oddly lonely for the time being.        See you in another film -         Your eyes intimidate me          You don’t seem to need any           The script's too good for me.
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Sep 18, 2025
Sep 18, 2025 at 7:40 PM UTC
the wallflower in that movie scene
For a peace of mind Edit life, ruthlessly Not tomorrow All today Pay attention If it's right It will propagate
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Jan 24, 2021
Jan 24, 2021 at 7:23 PM UTC
A Better Tomorrow
in that stillness moment i, questioning why people stare through (and stare within, staring through) that fuzz or mush like their covered window panes (staring within, staring through) that shy window pane that turns eeyoyvrbd   e r o e b y v y d   e  e  y  y  o  d  b  r  v so that i (staring in, staring at) may roam in eybdoryoyebordyoevydebdbeyodebedyobyobye turning my mind to that fuzz and static, becoming fogged window pane to look out (and stare) like rain droplets caressing so rough they fall to pound that pavement pavement so coarse and electric like the peppered mountain range where i stand my shoes fill like leaking boats to roam, to wander, in that desolate diorite range (staring within) questioning (staring through) as time joining disappearing as headache turns everybody to everything turns eybd   oryoy        ebordyoev  ydeb       dbeyodebe           dyobyobye ebdoybeod       ebdoeboy debot     vverbdyodv   verdbey    odbver  vebsrobe      ybddoeb
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 9:27 PM UTC
Thinking [Revised]
It's easy to write, Difficult to edit. Especially When the tale is mine.
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Jun 24, 2019
Jun 24, 2019 at 2:31 PM UTC
Dilemma of writer
Down to the end of a wooden dock That sticks out a good way into the water, She sat legs crisscrossed in a knot, hunched over With her elbows to her knees, head resting In her palms. She tries controlling her breathing, But holding her breath makes her throat expand Like it is croaking. Saliva pools in the lower corners Of her mouth under her tongue, and she barely has time To adjust herself as the bile climbs out of her throat And down the front of her yellow crop top, dripping Onto her stomach and crossed legs. Tears are forced From her ducts as her stomach convulses. Capillaries Around her eyes are popping from strain. Feeling weak, She falls to the left on her side and curls into a trembling ball But she wants to get the ***** off her As soon as possible. Her shaking palms Press against the splintering deck, pushing To her knees to feel what was once in her stomach squish Between her fingers making her stomach spasm; She scrambles to her feet as fast as she can When her only source of lighting is dying From the wind. Before righting her balance, she slips Backwards in the bile and tumbles into the blackened lake. Her head Plunges first and water came rushing into her nose. It burns Her nasal cavities as her eyes tear open in fear. She’s disoriented From the alcohol in her system and the water is too strong Against her weakened limbs. She tries to position herself Up right, but the more she moves, the deeper she sinks. She holds her breath and tries To ignore the burning sensation up her nose and on The surface of her eyes in her head and she can’t Hold on. Oxygen isn’t going where it needs to and the edges Of her vision darken. As a last attempt to fight, she reaches Forward to grasp at anything she can get ahold of. Her fingertips Stretch and curl only to move through the murky prison. Her vision Is almost completely blackened out as she surrenders Her losing fight. There’s a burn in her chest that grows As the rhythm behind it slows. Her body, Like the water, is still, cold, and tinted blue.
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Jun 10, 2019
Jun 10, 2019 at 12:05 AM UTC
Burning Blue
Down to the end of a wooden dock That sticks out a good way into the water, She sat legs crisscrossed in a knot, hunched over With her elbows to her knees, head resting In her palms. She tries controlling her breathing, But holding her breath makes her throat expand Like it is croaking. Saliva pools in the lower corners Of her mouth under her tongue, and she barely has time To adjust herself as the bile climbs out of her throat And down the front of her yellow crop top, dripping Onto her stomach and crossed legs. Tears are forced From her ducts as her stomach convulses. Capillaries Around her eyes are popping from strain. Feeling weak, She falls to the left on her side and curls into a trembling ball But she wants to get the ***** off her As soon as possible. Her shaking palms Press against the splintering deck, pushing To her knees to feel what was once in her stomach squish Between her fingers making her stomach spasm; She scrambles to her feet as fast as she can When her only source of lighting is dying From the wind. Before righting her balance, she slips Backwards in the bile and tumbles into the blackened lake. Her head Plunges first and water came rushing into her nose. It burns Her nasal cavities as her eyes tear open in fear. She’s disoriented From the alcohol in her system and the water is too strong Against her weakened limbs. She tries to position herself Up right, but the more she moves, the deeper she sinks. She holds her breath and tries To ignore the burning sensation up her nose and on The surface of her eyes in her head and she can’t Hold on. Oxygen isn’t going where it needs to and the edges Of her vision darken. As a last attempt to fight, she reaches Forward to grasp at anything she can get ahold of. Her fingertips Stretch and curl only to move through the murky prison. Her vision Is almost completely blackened out as she surrenders Her losing fight. There’s a burn in her chest that grows As the rhythm behind it slows. Her body, Like the water, is still, cold, and tinted blue.
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Greetings, it is merely I,    He who breathes despite the lack of air,    Gasping at a tenuous breeze. I'd call this breath of redundant utterings,    A practice of utter futility. The breadth of my wonderment at the crushing silence graced upon my deafened ears,    I stand fast as the verbal stone is cast upon my fragile being,    Your callousness resounds within my vacancy,    Occupied by none other,    Confined within my ceaseless selflessness,    Even if it is imperfect. I am merely a soul.    Cast 'pon the mercifully unforgiving earth.    Borne brazenly to those who are willing to listen,    At the risk of those who won't. Thrust'd herein I lye,    Gazing 'pon the relentless monochrome.    Searching for any guiding light. I am merely a man,    Searching for a home.    I am merely the mind within which I reside,    I am,    Merely,    Who I am. ~Robert van Lingen
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Apr 24, 2019
Apr 24, 2019 at 7:54 AM UTC
Merely [Edit]
We are all dictionaries; Collections of words, Defined by our commonality, Refined by our uniqueness. We edit and omit, Abbreviate and compound, Expanding our vocabulary, In the hope of rewriting our yesterdays Into a best-selling tomorrow.
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Mar 17, 2019
Mar 17, 2019 at 12:39 AM UTC
Dictionary
And so I drank her. A high ball glass of seduction Shaken with whiskey lips Wide hips Sugar rim Sin and forgiveness. I drank her blind And ordered another.
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Feb 4, 2019
Feb 4, 2019 at 5:29 PM UTC
I like her in the rocks
There is no grander way my spirit of dissolution is lined with angel's teeth hands exploring, indulging themselves bulwark of a new day's dream rigid of eye, Colliding with mutinies as in the mechanical cavorting of creatures marching, Past albatrosses appearing and hindering caffeine messengers from the ether, Somewhere if not here aborted holding hands with disdain there are many ways to be anything. words exchanged with impossibility are untied threads piling up until there is time spare to sketch them with morning breath, preoccupation grandstanding efforts minds broken **** coloured dawn of convenience rigid and timebound, all must inhale the earth smoothly
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Nov 16, 2018
Nov 16, 2018 at 11:42 AM UTC
My spirit of dissolution
Don't impose your editorial skills on my story unless you want to add yourself to my chapters
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Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 4:42 AM UTC
Compilation
redskin, cheekbones, upturned eyes you call me names, pick apart my features there's much for you to analyze none of it good enough even as you slit my belly and take my skin you think me rough wearing me like a hood you become Pocahontas, Matoaka, Indian Princess you think the thrum of your blood is the sound of a drum you consume me, trick yourself Redskin Princess
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Sep 16, 2018
Sep 16, 2018 at 3:10 PM UTC
redskin princess
Photographs enable us to forget but force us to remember.
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Aug 12, 2018
Aug 12, 2018 at 4:32 PM UTC
A thought 2
Que mañana lluevan rosas, que te bese un ángel en el pecho y no se me pase el tiempo, que me alimente tu recuerdo, y que sepas que aún te pienso....
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May 26, 2018
May 26, 2018 at 2:37 AM UTC
Que
if you'd like to Change me Then double click to Edit my thoughts
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Jul 13, 2018
Jul 13, 2018 at 11:43 PM UTC
Edit
Take a picture. Snap! Now show the world where you have been That brilliant destination and all of the sights that you have seen Be it Morocco and onto Timbuctoo, not a thing ever went wrong The lies that we can tell whilst singing a different song We live the perfect life as seen by the planet and its friends Facebook, Twitter, Snapchat, instantly removed in a millisecond For what they can see is fake and often ****** A quick brush up, a digitized wipe and Instagram is oh so worthy A story to tell your friends of that fantastic night out Not to mention that later on the bouncer kicked you all out Delete that girl in the background that you pulled after that shot The town bike to all who know, never going back to that spot For social media will always tell a different story Best looking people in the frame, a night of unreal glory Waking up with an STD, let’s keep that well away Some **** at the bar not smooth and slick, forget the box of Milk Tray For this never happened looking down at your feet Hers or his, whoevers bed it is Hence, Edited JJB
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 4:18 PM UTC
Edited
portals, boundaries, encased snapshots, an edit. a consumable fragment, a glimpse, palatable.
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 7:02 AM UTC
Window
Filtered faces Staged selfies Eating oysters Look at my new watch, sneakers this and that Look at the places I visit Look at my perfect life No colours are too bright Edited to perfection Cropped out the background Hide the mess If they don’t see it then it doesn’t exist This is my wonderful wife, life, pooch and house If I didn’t stage that selfie then this is all of what you would see the dog that won’t stop barking, the house that needs cleaned and possibly refurbished, the wife scrambling at the debt letters on the kitchen counter wondering why the money don’t cover it The life you wish to filter and draw a line under with the caption “perfect life”
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Mar 27, 2018
Mar 27, 2018 at 10:54 AM UTC
Filtered lives
Feel it Plan it, Rethink, Ink it Read it, Edit, Connect it, Then beautify Love it Save it Release free With the magic of your words.
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Feb 24, 2018
Feb 24, 2018 at 9:21 PM UTC
Guru Mantra On Writing
If you don't like whats being said don't listen If you don't like what you see don't look If you're easily ass-hurt, over stupid apply some sort of ointment If you want to edit history tear down statues, and appointments If you want to censor art, and rights be a politician If you want to throw rocks and stones you're better off, in prison If you want to keep people down join or goto church If you want to tell me what to do Keep It To Your Loathsome Self, And Shove It Up Your *** Until It Hurts....
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Aug 17, 2017
Aug 17, 2017 at 10:32 AM UTC
Edited and Censored
Hold it in cut clean the vitals How I see a simple procedure going wrong is the anxiety of the believer. The Optimist that fears the pessimistic balance. True lovers of the art. Exhale sedation equals Meditation Minds wander when watching the reflection of ever moving sound and light through the world of water. Sip the air in Release the third eyes tears A figure of speech. Or a meaning that only the experienced can speak for? But nothing is trivial in the pursuit and may it suit you so. DOnot BlinK Digging holes to sleep in There is a goal of destruction. Caused either by thy self or the weight out on thy self by others. However this weight becomes lighter as I become stronger in bearing it. Should it ever be cast off I fear I would not exist. Let the music in Silhouettes are my truth But now the doubt has been raised... The Cave men will now question their Gods. The banished becomes a Martyr of everyones self doubt. Meet the eyes of your maker Blind, Deft, Paralyzed You can find them. I have them. Everyone and almost everything does. look deep, drink the knowledge and use it to cure. Become the knife to the weave of time and free our paths. Become a monster when getting hijacked in your car, drive into a large object fast, all the while stare at aggressor silently A Monster is a matter of opinion. But I digress that it should be questioned whether or not humans can be monsters and no longer humans. To add someone who becomes a monster may never have the chance to become human. The odds are stacked against humans. laugh in our beds for our sins Hard Rock Balled I don't mind good and evil. I don't much care for what they are. Experiencing them I care about. Time fractals across the Insomniac Ramblers body Criticize, Critique, Commit Dream for others. Imagine the unknown. Believe in oneself.
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Sep 18, 2016
Sep 18, 2016 at 2:37 AM UTC
I Would Like You To Inhale
Hold it in cut clean the vitals How I see a simple procedure going wrong is the anxiety of the believer. The Optimist that fears the pessimistic balance. True lovers of the art. Exhale sedation equals Meditation Minds wander when watching the reflection of ever moving sound and light through the world of water. Sip the air in Release the third eyes tears A figure of speech. Or a meaning that only the experienced can speak for? But nothing is trivial in the pursuit and may it suit you so. DOnot BlinK Digging holes to sleep in There is a goal of destruction. Caused either by thy self or the weight out on thy self by others. However this weight becomes lighter as I become stronger in bearing it. Should it ever be cast off I fear I would not exist. Let the music in Silhouettes are my truth But now the doubt has been raised... The Cave men will now question their Gods. The banished becomes a Martyr of everyones self doubt. Meet the eyes of your maker Blind, Deft, Paralyzed You can find them. I have them. Everyone and almost everything does. look deep, drink the knowledge and use it to cure. Become the knife to the weave of time and free our paths. Become a monster when getting hijacked in your car, drive into a large object fast, all the while stare at aggressor silently A Monster is a matter of opinion. But I digress that it should be questioned whether or not humans can be monsters and no longer humans. To add someone who becomes a monster may never have the chance to become human. The odds are stacked against humans. laugh in our beds for our sins Hard Rock Balled I don't mind good and evil. I don't much care for what they are. Experiencing them I care about. Time fractals across the Insomniac Ramblers body Criticize, Critique, Commit Dream for others. Imagine the unknown. Believe in oneself.
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