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i'm humbled being here and i'm not sure why i'm visiting so i'm allowed    right?    so many the stones seem to go on forever and i dare not step on one    no that would be disrespectful    inconsiderate so i walk around sometimes hop if it's last minute and i find him here    alone   a grey stone      a military stone a proud army man but how proud can you be    after the fact i clean it up    the stone brush off the dirt, dried leaves    so i can look    and i look reading his name my heart skips a beat     my throat constricts my stomach hurts i miss him    my dad i surely, truly unapologetically    miss him but it doesn't really matter, does it he's not coming back    he's gone   and i'm left here to figure things out by myself and it hurts.
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May 3, 2015
May 3, 2015 at 3:43 PM UTC
gone too soon
i'm humbled being here and i'm not sure why i'm visiting so i'm allowed    right?    so many the stones seem to go on forever and i dare not step on one    no that would be disrespectful    inconsiderate so i walk around sometimes hop if it's last minute and i find him here    alone   a grey stone      a military stone a proud army man but how proud can you be    after the fact i clean it up    the stone brush off the dirt, dried leaves    so i can look    and i look reading his name my heart skips a beat     my throat constricts my stomach hurts i miss him    my dad i surely, truly unapologetically    miss him but it doesn't really matter, does it he's not coming back    he's gone   and i'm left here to figure things out by myself and it hurts.
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May 3, 2015
May 3, 2015 at 3:43 PM UTC
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