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Congratulations. You have done it – Created such a spectacular façade no one will even try to see what’s behind it. No one will get a peek at the wreck you are within. So rejoice. You have achieved what you set out to do. Kept everyone out. No one knows you are broken; no one is looking to fix you. And you are so busy keeping up your false pretences, you haven't noticed the walls you built to keep the world at bay have also fenced you in. The world shall only see what you want it to see. You are safe in your steel cage. Really, well done.
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Apr 21, 2015
Apr 21, 2015 at 9:10 AM UTC
Well Done
Congratulations. You have done it – Created such a spectacular façade no one will even try to see what’s behind it. No one will get a peek at the wreck you are within. So rejoice. You have achieved what you set out to do. Kept everyone out. No one knows you are broken; no one is looking to fix you. And you are so busy keeping up your false pretences, you haven't noticed the walls you built to keep the world at bay have also fenced you in. The world shall only see what you want it to see. You are safe in your steel cage. Really, well done.
NaPoWriMo Day #21 Poetry form: Free verse
ms_reluctance
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Apr 21, 2015
Apr 21, 2015 at 9:10 AM UTC
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