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Doctor told me I got a Vitamin D deficiency Thought *"I coulda told you that! It's been 7 months!"* #TrueStory But in all seriousness Twas a relief To have an explanation For all the fatigue And flu and aches And moods I know I'm sick but was Tired of always feelin ill Child with Ricketts level Gave me some souped up pills Could feel it in my bone ahhs! This is the ****** *** Alive again! Spring in my step! And though this is all said in fun There's lessons to be taken From the blood tests I just had done Put those vampire tendencies Behind you Catch them rays Enjoy the ride And erase the gloomy days Of sitting inside Go get out in the sun! AND IF NOT GO GET YOURSELF SOME! ;)
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 9:43 PM UTC
She wants the D!
Doctor told me I got a Vitamin D deficiency Thought *"I coulda told you that! It's been 7 months!"* #TrueStory But in all seriousness Twas a relief To have an explanation For all the fatigue And flu and aches And moods I know I'm sick but was Tired of always feelin ill Child with Ricketts level Gave me some souped up pills Could feel it in my bone ahhs! This is the ****** *** Alive again! Spring in my step! And though this is all said in fun There's lessons to be taken From the blood tests I just had done Put those vampire tendencies Behind you Catch them rays Enjoy the ride And erase the gloomy days Of sitting inside Go get out in the sun! AND IF NOT GO GET YOURSELF SOME! ;)
Bit tongue and cheek but true stories. If anyone's feeling a little low it's worthwhile to go get your vitamin D levels checked. We are children of the light after all!
#life#illness#sun#happy#funny#fun#health#wordplay#cheeky
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 9:43 PM UTC
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