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The film just ended and I am faithfully here, waiting. Independently of my dependence on you and that now I am not concerned about my concerns, I wait, for your message because I have sacrificed quite a bit for such an uncertain reward as your love might be —I almost wrote lofe—, and waiting for a reply is a bit quieter. I'm sure you must be busy, I am busy too, thinking 'bout you, waiting like I have been for months I guess, till you realised that I am not the only one in need of the other. During this wandering, 'Have you answered?' that's my ocassional wondering, but I check, and you haven't. Doesn't matter. I just wanted to write while I wait. Somewhat patiently. (Laughs) However, it is close to 01:30, thus, as said my role, Demetrius, in our adaptation or version: "I'm tired. I think I'll get some rest."
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Mar 31, 2015
Mar 31, 2015 at 7:26 PM UTC
Waiting
The film just ended and I am faithfully here, waiting. Independently of my dependence on you and that now I am not concerned about my concerns, I wait, for your message because I have sacrificed quite a bit for such an uncertain reward as your love might be —I almost wrote lofe—, and waiting for a reply is a bit quieter. I'm sure you must be busy, I am busy too, thinking 'bout you, waiting like I have been for months I guess, till you realised that I am not the only one in need of the other. During this wandering, 'Have you answered?' that's my ocassional wondering, but I check, and you haven't. Doesn't matter. I just wanted to write while I wait. Somewhat patiently. (Laughs) However, it is close to 01:30, thus, as said my role, Demetrius, in our adaptation or version: "I'm tired. I think I'll get some rest."
This poem is a bit like Every Breath You Take, it can be seen as creepy. If You are reading this please don't get me wrong :P I find it quite poetic, not obsessive or whatever.
miguel-serrano
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Mar 31, 2015
Mar 31, 2015 at 7:26 PM UTC
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