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you said you were leaving i was overwhelmed by this happiness you were finally out of my life i could finally be free so you packed your things, you went to your car and loaded it then, you turned to me pulled out a handgun and shot me in the chest my skin tore and presented a large gaping hole and from it poured bright red disappointment my ribs cracked and out rolled my heart onto the concrete of my patio you laughed a hearty laugh with wicked undertones you shoved your gun into your pocket watched me choke, watched me scream at the top of my lungs, struggle for air, struggle for anything then towered me, bent down swiftly and picked up the bleeding thing you smirked at me, "only taking what's mine" i never saw you again
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Mar 30, 2015
Mar 30, 2015 at 9:05 PM UTC
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you said you were leaving i was overwhelmed by this happiness you were finally out of my life i could finally be free so you packed your things, you went to your car and loaded it then, you turned to me pulled out a handgun and shot me in the chest my skin tore and presented a large gaping hole and from it poured bright red disappointment my ribs cracked and out rolled my heart onto the concrete of my patio you laughed a hearty laugh with wicked undertones you shoved your gun into your pocket watched me choke, watched me scream at the top of my lungs, struggle for air, struggle for anything then towered me, bent down swiftly and picked up the bleeding thing you smirked at me, "only taking what's mine" i never saw you again
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Mar 30, 2015
Mar 30, 2015 at 9:05 PM UTC
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