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Life is like a highway, you never know where it is going to take you, With multiple ways to get to your destination like different exits on the highway, And plenty of choices and challenges, Comes new opportunities and outcomes, Some good and some bad, You never know the full consequence Until you have taken it too far
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Mar 9, 2015
Mar 9, 2015 at 1:53 AM UTC
Life
Life is like a highway, you never know where it is going to take you, With multiple ways to get to your destination like different exits on the highway, And plenty of choices and challenges, Comes new opportunities and outcomes, Some good and some bad, You never know the full consequence Until you have taken it too far
I am looking for some critiques on this poem... Also looking for some interpretations of it. Tell me what you think of it and keep in mind that I am young and not good at writing poems. Any tips would be greatly appreciated.
garry-napkin
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Melbourne
Mar 9, 2015
Mar 9, 2015 at 1:53 AM UTC
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