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garry-napkin
garry-napkin
Melbourne Looking for critiques on my poems...
War is like a debate with two sides, Arguing in the form of blood, Red like the lava from a volcano, deadly and painful, With the roar of massive tanks, like a lion roaring at it's prey, And with the screams and cries of the dying, what a sorrow sight it is, Although war can be catastrophic, Emerging from it could compensate With new ideas and new designs.
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Mar 9, 2015
Mar 9, 2015 at 1:57 AM UTC
War
Life is like a highway, you never know where it is going to take you, With multiple ways to get to your destination like different exits on the highway, And plenty of choices and challenges, Comes new opportunities and outcomes, Some good and some bad, You never know the full consequence Until you have taken it too far
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Mar 9, 2015
Mar 9, 2015 at 1:53 AM UTC
Life