I see what you're doing; I know what you are.
Seen you travel some distance through
this lyrical bar.
I know your particular flavor,
as you 'give' yet leave nothing
to savor.
Did you say it all...did you feed your
callous need?
As your 'so called' critiques and comments
just left another to bleed?
How 'brave' you are behind your avatar,
but you see,
You've done little, if anything, to honestly
impress me.
You use your lack of diplomatic restraint
to simply crush spirits and leave behind
a dark, bitter taint.
Did you say all you needed, does is make
you feel better?
To ruffle thin feathers; crippling feelings
altogether?
I know what you're doing; I could BE you,
if I very well wanted to!
The bile and power of your word,
leaves poor souls understanding
that their thoughts and opinions, to you,
are absurd.
Time after time I read your insolent speeches
on many a blog,
as you spew forth your 'wisdom', dispensing
a high voltage flog.
I know what you're doing; I could BE you,
if I very well wanted to!
Unlike YOU, 'friend', I prefer to pay visits
and leave a word of kindness;
never leaving them with lyrical blindness.
Sometimes I may read, and have nothing
to say...if their words overwhelm, hit a nerve,
or inspire my mind to stray...to a place of
recognition...far, far away.
I just felt this deep need to express,
how you're grating on my nerves;
with your sour, evil comments
just disguised as 'clever words'.
Go on now, my 'friend', try to pen
words that INSPIRE...
I promise I'll be kind, even as
I unleash my fire...
unto the likes of you...
such a mean spirited shrew!
So next time, give great thought
to your comment before you click away,
'cause I know many a great poet here,
that by YOUR cold, pathetic words...
will NOT be chased away!
-by Mercurychyld
Copyrights
Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 9:18 PM UTC
I see what you're doing; I know what you are.
Seen you travel some distance through
this lyrical bar.
I know your particular flavor,
as you 'give' yet leave nothing
to savor.
Did you say it all...did you feed your
callous need?
As your 'so called' critiques and comments
just left another to bleed?
How 'brave' you are behind your avatar,
but you see,
You've done little, if anything, to honestly
impress me.
You use your lack of diplomatic restraint
to simply crush spirits and leave behind
a dark, bitter taint.
Did you say all you needed, does is make
you feel better?
To ruffle thin feathers; crippling feelings
altogether?
I know what you're doing; I could BE you,
if I very well wanted to!
The bile and power of your word,
leaves poor souls understanding
that their thoughts and opinions, to you,
are absurd.
Time after time I read your insolent speeches
on many a blog,
as you spew forth your 'wisdom', dispensing
a high voltage flog.
I know what you're doing; I could BE you,
if I very well wanted to!
Unlike YOU, 'friend', I prefer to pay visits
and leave a word of kindness;
never leaving them with lyrical blindness.
Sometimes I may read, and have nothing
to say...if their words overwhelm, hit a nerve,
or inspire my mind to stray...to a place of
recognition...far, far away.
I just felt this deep need to express,
how you're grating on my nerves;
with your sour, evil comments
just disguised as 'clever words'.
Go on now, my 'friend', try to pen
words that INSPIRE...
I promise I'll be kind, even as
I unleash my fire...
unto the likes of you...
such a mean spirited shrew!
So next time, give great thought
to your comment before you click away,
'cause I know many a great poet here,
that by YOUR cold, pathetic words...
will NOT be chased away!
-by Mercurychyld
Copyrights
Dedicated to Elsa Angelica, and all of those who've ever had to deal with harsh words in regard to something you've written. Never stop writing friends.
