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I began writing of thee, 63   but after considerable effort and time belched out only glib rhyme   when I recalled my last walk, however, it was in winter woods, only yesterday, the frozen ground crunched under my ancient boots, speaking to me in its own verse   “move fast, this white art won’t last, make your tracks deep, soon we’ll not make a peep”     so I complied, stomping on the frigid frost shuffling with aging caution on thick ice   watching my breath mist gray the still air   was such the entire walk one foot after another, making tracks lesser numbered beasts would sniff and see…   fading remnants of the me     then I saw you, crystalline knives   hanging from brittle branches long ago grayed   reflecting all that came within your sight   in your solid time, dripping drops slowly, silently, before freezing once again in the approaching night
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Feb 28, 2015
Feb 28, 2015 at 12:02 PM UTC
ice daggers, winter woods*
I began writing of thee, 63   but after considerable effort and time belched out only glib rhyme   when I recalled my last walk, however, it was in winter woods, only yesterday, the frozen ground crunched under my ancient boots, speaking to me in its own verse   “move fast, this white art won’t last, make your tracks deep, soon we’ll not make a peep”     so I complied, stomping on the frigid frost shuffling with aging caution on thick ice   watching my breath mist gray the still air   was such the entire walk one foot after another, making tracks lesser numbered beasts would sniff and see…   fading remnants of the me     then I saw you, crystalline knives   hanging from brittle branches long ago grayed   reflecting all that came within your sight   in your solid time, dripping drops slowly, silently, before freezing once again in the approaching night
*written on the eve of my 63rd birthday
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Feb 28, 2015
Feb 28, 2015 at 12:02 PM UTC
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