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the carpet was her friend   its woven pile stitched by a Java descendent just for this sparkling occasion, or a thousand others   when she slithered across it   to find the crystal goblet, or porcelain bowl       the night began with promise a phone call from him, or the other him saying he would be there after dinner when it was night enough to enter under cover of darkness   last time he had entered on the sofa, though she didn’t remember anything but rolling onto the floor, and waking the next morn rug burns on her back, dry tracks of him on her thighs   and the carpet to the door     she had asked for more, more of him, more of the wine, more of the night that came and went like he, without so much as a by your leave   doubtless there would be other nights, when they would turn off the lights and sink as one, in a silken simmering sea together to find treasures on the ancient floor…   more likely, in her world of more, he would walk away again   her left draped in sweat, and the familiar scent   of disappointment
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Feb 24, 2015
Feb 24, 2015 at 12:16 PM UTC
her pearls are real
the carpet was her friend   its woven pile stitched by a Java descendent just for this sparkling occasion, or a thousand others   when she slithered across it   to find the crystal goblet, or porcelain bowl       the night began with promise a phone call from him, or the other him saying he would be there after dinner when it was night enough to enter under cover of darkness   last time he had entered on the sofa, though she didn’t remember anything but rolling onto the floor, and waking the next morn rug burns on her back, dry tracks of him on her thighs   and the carpet to the door     she had asked for more, more of him, more of the wine, more of the night that came and went like he, without so much as a by your leave   doubtless there would be other nights, when they would turn off the lights and sink as one, in a silken simmering sea together to find treasures on the ancient floor…   more likely, in her world of more, he would walk away again   her left draped in sweat, and the familiar scent   of disappointment
inspired by the Francesca Redwine painting, "One Night at a Time" from the Lush series--don't know if this link to the painting will work, but it is worth a try--great painting--reminds me of Hopper--http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c84/spysgrandson/022415fr.jpg
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Feb 24, 2015
Feb 24, 2015 at 12:16 PM UTC
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