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You feel something Someone Always watching Always waiting Always glancing Nothing to see Nothing to hear Just the feeling You never feel alone You know you’re never alone Where are they hiding Where are they watching Why are they watching For Once I sit alone Silence ringing in my ears For once My mind is quiet No thoughts of my mistakes No thoughts of my joyful times No thoughts lurking in the shadows For once My mind is without a thought For one My mind is peaceful Without a sound Still I cherish this It’s not often that my mind allows stillness It’s never fails to torment me Never lets me forget For once My mind is tired For once My mind has quit For once My mind has failed me As I have failed you For once My mind is gone And so am I
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Feb 22, 2015
Feb 22, 2015 at 6:31 PM UTC
Prying Eyes
You feel something Someone Always watching Always waiting Always glancing Nothing to see Nothing to hear Just the feeling You never feel alone You know you’re never alone Where are they hiding Where are they watching Why are they watching For Once I sit alone Silence ringing in my ears For once My mind is quiet No thoughts of my mistakes No thoughts of my joyful times No thoughts lurking in the shadows For once My mind is without a thought For one My mind is peaceful Without a sound Still I cherish this It’s not often that my mind allows stillness It’s never fails to torment me Never lets me forget For once My mind is tired For once My mind has quit For once My mind has failed me As I have failed you For once My mind is gone And so am I
I'm having trouble with this one and would love some input on what I can do to improve it.
halieanna
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Feb 22, 2015
Feb 22, 2015 at 6:31 PM UTC
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