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Trapped in the bottle of reality I bang on the glass to scream for help. Trying to tip the bottle with my forceful body, I begin to roll down the massive hill of the sad truth: There is no getting out. I aim the heavy bottle toward the ocean, Hoping someone will save me. I am the message in a bottle crying for a solution, Waiting to be found.
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 3:57 PM UTC
Message in a bottle
Trapped in the bottle of reality I bang on the glass to scream for help. Trying to tip the bottle with my forceful body, I begin to roll down the massive hill of the sad truth: There is no getting out. I aim the heavy bottle toward the ocean, Hoping someone will save me. I am the message in a bottle crying for a solution, Waiting to be found.
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 3:57 PM UTC
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