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You, my dear, are not the sun. I will not label you as something that I need in order to survive; You are not here to make me grow; I can build castles inside me on my own-- I do not need you in order to rise. The moon has always been up there, trying to watch over our lonely souls and I hear its response through the night's soothing sighs. And you are not the moon, no, you do not deserve such a title. You are not a star, You are not as wonderful as the galaxies above and you most definitely are not the universe, composed of all things strange and lovely. You, I repeat, are not the sun. I will not grant you the permission to help me live. And I wish I had known that earlier.
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM UTC
Things that you're not
You, my dear, are not the sun. I will not label you as something that I need in order to survive; You are not here to make me grow; I can build castles inside me on my own-- I do not need you in order to rise. The moon has always been up there, trying to watch over our lonely souls and I hear its response through the night's soothing sighs. And you are not the moon, no, you do not deserve such a title. You are not a star, You are not as wonderful as the galaxies above and you most definitely are not the universe, composed of all things strange and lovely. You, I repeat, are not the sun. I will not grant you the permission to help me live. And I wish I had known that earlier.
I read a writing prompt on tumblr: "Use this sentence in or to spark a poem: "I wish I had known that earlier."" and I tried opening a book at a random page and closing my eyes, then pointing at a random word. I randomly pointed at the word "sun" so here's the poem I've composed.
laiviv
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM UTC
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